Fade

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Tuesday, 15-Jul-2008 19:24:52

Fading

Things fade, nothing remains with out change.
Time moves, rearranges lives to fit it's trends.
Friends wave when they see you walk by, no words exchange, just scenes writing and rewriting, changing life's plot day by day.
Nothing stays the same everything fades.
Tomorrow may look familiar, but some where, someplace differs
and change comes to touch your life..
Yeah they all say, it happens for a reason, but when the teardrops happen,
your left just asking why,
nothing stays the same and everything fades.

Post 2 by SunshineAndRain (I'm happily married, a mom of two and a fulltime college student.) on Sunday, 27-Jul-2008 20:04:58

Great work. Your writing is so clear and meaningful. It has depth and it questions one's understanding of the world. That's what a true writer does.

Post 3 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Sunday, 03-Aug-2008 1:15:06

The content of your poem is well connected with your title. You have so many ideas in this poem. Its so deep, and very thought provoking. Good job on your poem.